Sunday, 26 August 2012

ADDING DETAIL :)

In Rm 15 we have been learning about adding detail to a boring sentence। For example I changed the sentence the dog barked।
The red bull dog barked as loud as it could while trying to kill the blue angry pit bull.
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  1. POWERFUL ROOM1526 August 2012 at 17:23

    cool bro from Azhar.:)

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  2. POWERFUL ROOM1516 September 2012 at 17:13

    Nice dude!

    I like how you wrote IT BARKED AS LOUD AS IT COULD.
    It describes how it barked.

    From BOB

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